Vieux-Montréal Intermediate

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This class is for intermediate students (Group 2) in Norm Spatz's group in Vieux-Montréal. If you don't see others in your group they should be in Vieux-Montréal Advanced.

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Reply to: Cosmetic bio
7 années 2 mois ago

 1. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. I have to reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.

2. Leads people:  Adjectives and noun modifiers are almost never plural in English.

3. "..." --> Consider eliminating this ellipsis. Is it really necessary?

7 années 2 mois ago

Merci de ta suggestion. Peux-tu nous fournir un lien vers l'article?

Reply to: Product
7 années 2 mois ago

I think you have a great idea. I am a woman and I love the way we can choose the color, style, and fabric, for the product. Your invention is really ingenious because everything is ecologic. Everybody should think like you, because it will save the future of our earth!!  I actually wait to have some of your product if the dragons choose you :) 

Reply to: Products
7 années 2 mois ago

Hi Anne,
I really like your idea. I think I'll go a lot of time if it'll exist. Showing people the local beer would be very good for Quebec!

Reply to: Earth lab
7 années 2 mois ago

If your product is accepted by the Dragon's, it’s sure I buy it. It’s hard to find a good and environmental product today especially in cosmetic. I hope the price of yours business isn’t expensive. Are you sure, your product is 100% vegan, because you import by the other country.

Reply to: Product
7 années 2 mois ago

Hi pitou22 !
I believe, your idea of eco-friendly clothing is great. We need to take care of our environment and by choosing clothes that are that respond to a set of environmental and social criteria, we can help. Also, those pieces of clothing are usually expensive, so if you can find a way to reduce the price, I am pretty sure people will choose the environmental option. To resume, it is a good idea to produce in Quebec and to make people choose what they want. I hope Dragons will help you as you wish.

Reply to: Products
7 années 2 mois ago

You wrote: ...es are treated fairly and respectfully. The company will have its own ethical code ...

Feedback: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.

This time, I think I made less mistakes than my previous posts.

7 années 2 mois ago

I like your idea! When I do my shopping for a swimsuit I look for a quality product, who resist longer and fit well. I can spend a lot of money for a good swimsuit. I did not buy swimsuit who are create by a Montreal companies because I did not currently see this in store. The most of the time the products from Montreal companies are too expensive for me. If you can sell your swimsuits for a good price, I would buy it for sure! You said your company was environmentally friendly because you doing recycling, it's a very good idea. I like it! In the post, you talk about the models. I think you can take more models in a real form and not too skinny like the fashion industry.

Reply to: Earth lab
7 années 2 mois ago

I corrected my mistakes with Word and Virtual writing tutor.

I forgot my capitals on Canada, Canadian, United States and Australia.

I need to search for synonyms, I tend to write ''also'' when I start a sentence. I tried to change, I used ''as well''.

Non-toxic, I wrote it without a dash : non toxic.

7 années 2 mois ago
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Wow! I never thought that the company Cascade is environmentally engaged. The stats are amazing! You take a good company to describe what is a Canadian Company engaged. Cascade didn't do green washing. They do recycle for making their product. So, you really choose a good company :)


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Norm Spatz entered the Cégep system in 1989 teaching Architectural Technology in French. As a result of declining enrolment in his original department and the reform which made English a core studies requirement, he became an ESL teacher in 1997 but never abandoned his technical interests.

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