WRITING III A

Kansai University of International Studies
by 010 Takahiro on June 30, 2014
To tell the truth, in Japan, there are many people who are hungry. If you are before lunch, of course you are very hungry but I will pick up the people who are in more serious problem. 16%. Can you understand what number this is? This number shows the people in serious hunger in Japan. It means one out of seven people is suffering from hunger.

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Kansai University of International Studies
by 040 Moe on June 27, 2014
About aging society   Japan society is aging. Do you know? What is an aging society? First, I explain about the aging society of Japan.

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Kansai University of International Studies
by 015 Nick on June 23, 2014
                A serious problem. This time I think about Aging society.

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Kansai University of International Studies
by 043Risa on June 23, 2014
     Japan is falling into a crisis. One of the reasons, the aging population is brought. Do you know the Japanese state? It is very serious for Japanese, especially, young persons. So, I want to introduce about Japan’s aging population. Now, in Japan, there are a lot of old persons. If it becomes more 21% (the persons who be more 65 years old), it is very dangerous. It is very a serious problem. If aging continue all the time, Japanese maybe become extinct. So now, I point out some problems of aging population. First, development of medicine.

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Kansai University of International Studies
by 040 Moe on June 23, 2014
About games   I often play a game and I like a game very much. Because game is fun. It also becomes stress alleviation. However you should not play a game for a long time. It is not good for eyes. The recent game has good picture. And the story is wonderful. So there are many people absorbed in a game. In fact, I am one person in it.   There are various kinds of game. For example, FPS, TPS, RPG. FPS is abbreviation of “First Person Shooter”.

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Kansai University of International Studies
by 043Risa on June 23, 2014
I think playing the game is bad for children. There are many kind of games, for example, education, action, RPG (Roll Playing Game), adventure, simulation, puzzle, table, drive, quiz, shooting, etc. Out of these, I think action game is the worst for children because under the influence of this game, children murdering somebody may happen. Actually, there are a lot of cases in the world. In Japan, 16 years old girl killed her father by the hatchet in September 2007. This case is said that the comics called Higurashi no nakukoroni is influenced.

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Kansai University of International Studies
by 005 Yohei on June 23, 2014
     First the reason I am writing about the aging society is because it has been a problem in Japan for many years now. It’s a problem not because of the amount of old people but because of the low birth rate. So if the aging society continues the population of Japan will continue to reduce. But the aging society not only causes demerits but it causes merits too.

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Kansai University of International Studies
by 022 MISAKI on June 22, 2014
The sole of Tokyo Olympics and Paralympics 2022                                                               Japanese people will have Tokyo Olympics games and Tokyo Paralympics games in 2020. Today I would like to introduce about the sole of Tokyo Olympics games and Tokyo Paralympics games 2020. Let’s start!!

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Kansai University of International Studies
by 036 Yurika on June 22, 2014
The election of the location of the FIFA World Cup in 2018 and 2022 have stirred up a controversy whether there might have been corruption. In the World Cup 2018, it is decided that Russia will be the host and in the 2022’s Qatar (Qatar is a sovereign Arab country located in West Asia and would be the first Arab country to do so.). Other bidding countries for the World Cup in 2022 had been Australia, Japan, South Korea and the U.S.

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Kansai University of International Studies
by 010 Takahiro on June 20, 2014
Sanpo Yoshi was one of the words of consciousness of Omi merchant. Omi merchant was Japanese great merchant. They were from Omi, Shiga prefecture. In Japan, Osaka merchant and Ise merchant was also great merchant, so in Japan they were called as “the three greatest merchant”. Omi merchant was called as “Omi merchant” when they went out from Omi and succeed their job. Previous days, we have a lot of companies which are of the school of Omi merchant. For example, Toyota Motor Corporation, Takashimaya Company, Limited and Seibu Railway Company, Limited are of the school of Omi merchant.

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Kansai University of International Studies
by 031Azusa on June 19, 2014
Aging Society  

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Kansai University of International Studies
by 031Azusa on June 19, 2014
I read “Make your choice:Games or Grades”. The author insisted that” I play electronic games every day and my grade have not been as good as they potentially could be.”  I totally disagree with the author’s opinion because it is difficult to keep the only study. Probably, the author would play games too many times. It is natural that the grades will became low if people keep on playing games, and to make matters worse, they can be in poor health due to lack of sleep by doing extra game.

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Kansai University of International Studies
by 018 Saya on June 19, 2014
 I would like to tell you my opinion about the aging society.  In recent years, old people are increasing in Japan. Of course I think living long life is very important, but there is a lot of problems.

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Kansai University of International Studies
by 018 Saya on June 19, 2014
 I like to tell you my opinion about computer games.  In my opinion, I think computer games are not good, but if it is the contents of the educational purpose, I think that is good.

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Kansai University of International Studies
by 020 Koki on June 19, 2014
 I will write it about aging society. What is the aging society? It occurs when the population 65 years or older increases in d society and it becomes a large part of the total population. Declining birthrate often promotes further increases in the aging society’s rise. Declining birthrate and aging are not necessarily progressing at the same time and rate, but seem to be strongly related. Generally, the aging societies are classified as follows. “In the aging society, an aging rate is 7% -14%. Aged society is 14% -21%. The super aged society is more than 21%.

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Kansai University of International Studies
by 021 Atsushi on June 16, 2014
If you are bored, what do you do? If I am bored, I play football or I go to bed. However a lot of people say “I play game” because that is very interesting for a lot of people. I can’t understand this response because I don’t like playing game but a lot of people like laying game so I will introduce games.  

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Kansai University of International Studies
by Puppy on June 16, 2014
Opinions of agree or disagree about playing a Games.I disagreed about article. Because, playing the game can not be said unconditionally bad. The way of thinking that games in education were bad was all wrong to begin with in the first place.  One does not become stupid when the game is played. I think that it is the image that parents embraced against children are crazy about the game without any study. There are a lot of good parts in the game. I'll provides examples of some.

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Kansai University of International Studies
by 010 Takahiro on June 16, 2014
 I agree with the article of “Games or Grades” but I won’t stop playing game because I want to chat other people in game but sometimes I don’t want to talk with vulgarity people because they don’t know better talking way on-line world. In addition, I have a lot of bad experience about playing games. I guess all of people who read my article think I should stop playing game not to feel such a thing. Actually, we always had problems or squabbles with other player who our friends don’t know.

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Kansai University of International Studies
by 036 Yurika on June 14, 2014
The society worldwide is ageing, it is estimated that the population will shrink about 31.9 percent in 2060 as the average of the total fertility rate per woman in the developed countries is getting lower. Facing these problems, there are people arguing the positive effects and others the negative ones. In the following, I would like to discuss both opinions in regard to Japan and also what could be done about it.  

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4 years 9 months ago

I agree with you. And I hope that TPP helps to have good relationships between 12 countries. Thank you for replying.

4 years 9 months ago

Hello, I am a university student in KUIS.
I also picked up "free trade" on my paper, so I was interested in reading yours. I agree with your opinion, for example, I pick up your writing "Free trade has many benefits,~". Yes, free trade has many benefits for each country. Of course, it has some demerits, so I want each country to solve these demerits. If you have time to read my article, please read it. I enjoyed reading yours, thank you!

Reply to: Fukushima
4 years 9 months ago

Thank you for your comment. I am really grad because you said that “we musn't forget about the Great East Japan Earthquake.” Of course, Japanese mast not forget it, and other countries people helped when disaster happened. We really thanks to you and others.

Reply to: Saving Syrians
4 years 9 months ago

Thank you for your comment. Naguib Sawiris's idea is an epoch making. If the idea becomes true, many refugees can get good life than now. However it will take long time to be.

Reply to: Saving Syrians
4 years 9 months ago

Thank you for your comment. I think that countries take refugees as each countries can. However, Japanese government has not accepted them yet. They are thinking about it now. I hope that refugees have safety live.

Reply to: Saving Syrians
4 years 9 months ago

Thank you for your comment. I understood that the US has many government officials, including republican presidential candidates, who think that all of the refugees could pose a threat to our safety. They think that by letting the refugees into the US, it would basically be the same as letting terrorist groups like ISIS free access to coming to America. I will research more.

Reply to: Saving Syrians
4 years 9 months ago

Thank you for your comment. I want to know your class discussion on this issue, please tell me. I think that the US accepts some refugees, so Japan also do that. Then I don’t think so that the US accepts them more, other countries also should accept them.

4 years 9 months ago

Hello!

Thank you for your comment. I'm very happy, because it seeems that you could understand the contents of my article. I would like to answer your questions. About Japanese domestic problems, there are problem of reconstruction of a disaster-stricken town, aging poplation with a declining birthrate problem, and so on. Japanese government has to solve these problems first, and solving the problems need money, so they don't have much money to save the refugees.

4 years 9 months ago

I hope Japanese government to negotiate well with other countries and be careful to think about demerits for Japan.

4 years 9 months ago

Thank you for your comment Josh W. TPP is a huge topic for many countries, we should think about it seriously as a one of a members of Japanese. I think that many of Japanese are thinks like me.
Thank you. Shiina

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Working in Japan has been an interesting and rewarding experience. I came to teaching after a career in finance, first as an accountant with major north american pharmaceutical firms and then as a financial advisor.

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