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Hello my name is Padli. I am from Kansai International University of
I read your article and it reminds me about the homeless in my country in
Indonesia. They do not only have home, address and many more to live.
Sometimes they commit crimes like stealing someone's wallet. They also sing
songs with guitar to get money in front of people’s house. I know these are
the only things that they can do to survive, but it is really annoying
for us. Unfortunately, the number will not shrink because it is too high.
It is different in Japan. I have lived in Osaka, Japan for more than 4
years and I have only seen the homeless in a village.
I do not know why there are no many homeless people here even though the
are quite expensive, but in 2016 while Tokyo counts fewer homeless in
daytime, advocacy group finds higher numbers at night, totaled 1,473.
Although they do not show up at stations or big parks frequently, some
people who thought their financial situation is unstable, they stay at
internet cafes, but they are not classified as homeless, so Tokyo
government assumes that there are still a number of homeless who are not
counted accurately (Osumi, 2016). Homelessness in every country has
different condition depending on the way of their thinking and how
the government is taking care of them. In my opinion, the government should
give them education so that they can get skills to do a job or do
business and have a bright future.
In the case of Canada, do you think this problem will be solved if the
government will prioritize it, or there are just way too many of them that
the national budget will not be enough if your suggestions will be
Hi, Gabriel. This is Shimin from Hyogo, Japan. Your posting is very informative.
It is undeniable that gun possession, gun control, and gun violence are major problems in America, that absolutely cannot be neglected. However, it is a larger problem when guns itself becomes the assumed method of solving the issue. Across articles that I have read before, there are Americans who used to not own guns. They started possessing them, in hope of protecting themselves from the real offenders who abuse the possession of the arms. It is truly a problem when Americans think that
the solution to the issue, is the issue itself. Having this mindset will only increase the number of people carrying guns in America, and not help at all with the idea to decrease gun violence.
In Japan, there are hardly any gun-related cases. Although it is difficult to say for the yakuza (mafia), gun possession is against the law. There are hunters in Japan who are allowed to possess and use them, but only with a license that is very tightly controlled. The process of obtaining the license is very strict, to the point that the authorities will actually ask parties related to the concerned hunter, in order to judge if the license can be processed.
America can solve the gun issue, only if she is truly determined to get rid of the arms in the country. However, it can be very complicated as the number of people involved is very huge, and the culture between America and Japan is very different.
What are the gun laws in Canada?
Thank you watching my essay.
Thank you for writing interesting essay. I enjoyed reading it. Of course I know him, because I like to watch figure skating. I think that it is the most beautiful sports. I want to meet him because he is so hansom and he is so kind of other people. I like his performance very much. He has the power to draw people into his performance. It is his great point. I have seen him playing performance with Mao Asada in entertainment. A pair of men and women is very sexy. I like pair performance more than his personal performance. If you see the opportunity, please see it
I really enjoyed reading your essay. i really like Ghibli from I were child, so your essay was very interesting. And I was surprised at the year of Studio Ghibli established. I thought it has a long history, but very young studio. I did not care what is the message they want to tell us through their movie, but after reading your essay, I want to know the meaning their movie has. Thanks to your essay, I can enjoy Ghibli's movie more and more.
Your essay was interesting for me. I like figure skate, so of course I know Yuzuru Hanyu. I think he is really genius figure skater. Especially, I think quadruple jump is great. I cannot jump even one spin. I often see him on TV, and I think his performance is so fantastic. Maybe, I think Yuzuru Hanyu makes an effort everyday and praactice hard training. I want to be stronger both of physical and mental like him. I could change my mind, because of your essay. Thank you.
Hello, Ms. Tachibana. I'm Muscle Konishi. Your essay was great to read for me. I'm also respect Hayao Miyazaki, because he is always saying "Bothersome making the movie". However, he made a lot of great animation movies in his life. His animation has his passion and fantasy world feeling. My favorite his movie is "Kaze Tatinu", because it was expressed the Horikoshi's real life. I was surprised his real and details illustrating. Many people has some respect on him, I think.Thank you.
I know Hayao Miyazaki and I think that he is very famous man. Also, he made very interesting Ghibli works. Especially, I like Sen to Chihiro no Kamikakushi (Spirited Away). When I was a child, I often watched the movie because it is very interesting story. In addition, he cherished his own perspective, so I think that he became a famous man around the world, too. I respect him because he keeps making works without giving up and he makes his effort day by day. Then, I thought that keeping my effort is important for me. I hope that I will see him some time.
I know Kohei Uchimura. He is very famous player around the world. He makes his effort every day, so I respect him. Many people will usually keep their efforts during two or three days. However, it is difficult to keep efforts every day. Also, he takes only one meal a day, so I was very surprised. He manages his body day by day. I thought that it is not easy to keep a health. In addition, I thought that his character is great, so I think that he is loved by many people around the world. I hope that I will see him some time.
Hello, Tomoyuki! I'm Muscle Konishi! Your essay was so easy to read, which means your essay was great. I know about you are the person who didn't give up, so I suggest about your respectable person will be strong person. It was right. You chose Mr. Matui. He was the monster person who played the baseball. He already retired playing baseball in major league, but he did a lot of achievements in his baseball life. You have strong interests in his mind. You might become a strong person in the future likes him!
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