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I like to see your opinion after reading my text. I did not talk about the benefits that exercises have on the kids' brain and I am really glad that you brought this idea. I think it would be nice to study this case and see if it exercise has a bigger influence on the kids. Thank you for reading my text and for making a comment! (Anne-Julie P)
Thanks for the advice! In fact, I watch television in english a lot but I should definitely read more to improve my structure! You're french is good because like you told me but for my english, I can understand what you want to say easily.
Thank you for your comment, I really appreciate it. I agree with you that I need to use more simple terms, but, for my defense, we have a biology class so terms like "eukaryotic" are already in our vocabulary. :-) ( It actually means with a "true" nucleus ) I also agree with the fact that I made a few mistakes, it is my biggest difficulty in the learning of English and I want to become better in the future.
I'm really glad you enjoyed my article. Thank you for your positive feedback
Thank you for reading my text. It is true to say that my text would have been better with more details about the sentence that you mentioned. It makes me happy to know that you liked the way I tried to explain the benefits that exercises have on our brain. I hope you have a nice day! (Anne-Julie P)
I think you're doing pretty good in french, it's not an easy language to learn. Thank you for your comment, I'll try and use less connective words in another article.
Thank you for your comment, I will keep that in mind and try to improve my structure! I appreciate that you gave me a constructive advice because all I want to do is to become better in english!
I agree with you, I should have put statistics on my text, it would have be great. I am glad to know that you are doing exercises to free your thoughts. Thank you for your comment! (Anne-Julie P)
Thank you, I appreciate the criticism and I'll work on that! :)