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Your topic and outline is very complete, and I suggest you take primary academic sources because come sources can be very biased on this subjects, due to controversies and the fact that this debate is taking place nowdays with mass shootings that occured in the past years. You should check gunlaws in countries that have the less murders by gun to help you finding a solution when it will be the time of finding one in your paper. Otherwise, good job and nice subject
I find this subject interesting, because child poverty in a Western country seems to be less common nowdays. Your outline is pretty good if you ask me, because it depicts well the content of your future paper. The only thing I would modify is you 2 major ideas of interest, they seem too vague. Otherwise, it is a nice start.
Your paper will be analyzing the causes of child exploitation in Philippines and India, and will be comparing how developed countries handle the issue compared to developing countries, and I believe doing both the analysis and the comparison will prevent depth in your paper as both are profound subjects that deserve a greater allocation of time than the length of this semester. Also, after choosing between the analysis and the comparison, choosing one of the Asian countries would make your essay more accurate and focused in terms of the causes and consequences of child exploitation
As for the areas of interest, I also wonder to what extent can the governments actually intervene in the countries' child exploitation with regulations and force. Moreover, it would be interesting to know whether or not placing regulations and using army force would actually benefit Philipines and India.
As for the sources, you seem to be confusing the terms "child exploitation" and "child labour." In fact, both have a slight yet crucial difference in meaning,
Overall, your ideas were well presented and interesting. Great work!
and by damn i mean, you have a good idea for your research paper! it should be a subject that is easy to research because of all the information that is available and it is an issue that is (unfortunately) still very relevant today, as you point out that it is still very common in countries like Bangladesh. you seem to already have a very clear structure for your paper and i get the feeling that it is a subject that interests you, i think it will make for a very good essay! i like also that you look at the correlation between the lack of education of the woman caused by forced marriage and the economic development of the country, very interesting approach!
two thumbs up!
This is a very interesting topic. I think you will find many articles on the subject and will be able to look at the issue from many different angles. Perhaps an area of interest for your paper could be how hard drug addiction affects people around the drug user. You could also take a look at the steps to recover from hard drug addiction. All in all, this is a good topic and will certainly be an interesting paper!
Hello ABarriault! I think you've chosen a serious topic that really needs to be discussed more frequently. I find it shocking that in this day and age, there are still countries that can't provide proper medical care for mothers and their children. You touched on several important ideas which I think will be insightful once you've developed them. However, the way you structured your important questions was slightly confusing (I think you misplaced a few words). For your second question, I would specify how culture is related to infant mortality seeing as the connection wasn't clear to me at first. I would also consider talking about how Subsaharan Africa became the place with the highest infant mortality rate. It would be interesting to know how it got there and not other places. Keep up the good work!
This is a very interesting subject, as I think technology has some negative effect on teenagers. However, you should not neglect research on the positive effect of technology on teenagers. It is a good subject, but you could go in even more dept of the subject to make it even more interesting. Don't tell us what we already know; find interesting fact, causes, effects, consequences, that are not obvious. That will make your paper on this social issue more complete. Your questions are good, but too similar one to another. Make sure you don't repeat yourself throughout your whole paper. Again, try to find more aspect of technology that you could discuss about in your paper. Overall, good job! I'm hoping to read the final result.
This is a great topic and your paper seems to be on the right track! What would be interesting would be to see what Canada's response to the issue is and how it works to reduce child labor in India, since looking at western countries in general might be a lot of work. I think that including the United Nations' view in your paper is a great idea and will give you plenty of information on the subject as well. Perhaps another area of interest could be the economic implications behind child labor in India or local government policies on the subject. Overall, I think you will have plenty to talk about and your subject is very interesting!
I think you have a great subject to work on. I like the causes and effects that you decided to focus on; it is important to not focus on only one cause of PTSD (let's say veteran of wars that witnessed multiple war-time acts), because there is no cause that is more important or deserve more to be talked about. I like the comparison between the effects of war and abusive parents. They probably need to be treated differently but it all comes to the same end; there is a stigma in society that makes people not want to seek for help. Overall, great subject and great elements. I would definitely read your paper to learn more about it.
Your outline is good. I don't really understand your first area of interest question. It seems like you are focusing your topic on child labour in India and Philippines. You should specify that as the topic since there are many types of child exploitation, such as sexual exploitation, or child forced to fight as child soldiers, or the use of children to sell illegal substances. You could talk about the emotional, physical and social problems that the children face and why the policies to decrease child labour aren't followed.
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