B 102 TECHNICAL COMMUNICATION CEGEP DE JONQUIERE
About this class
The Cegep de Jonquiere is situated in northeastern Québec. The college hosts the Media, Arts and Technology program among other Technical and Pre university programs in Engineering and the Sciences.
Students of B 102 Technical Communication aim to acheive a more professional level of language, precise and concise word choice while avoiding the use of false cognates and improving their grammar.
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Your text is very concise and I feel like I am ready to organise a press conference after reading it. The add of subtitles is relevant because the text looks airy and easily understandable for the reader. However, it would have been a good idea to write a paragraph about the things to avoid when organising a press conference.
I love your text and your subject! The technical words are well described, I easily understand what they mean. Moreover, I appreciate the manner your text is divided, because it is easier to follow with subtitles. However, I notice in the conclusion of your text that it is written "fil is comples", but I understand you mean film is complex and it was just an inattention mistake. In brief, despite this, your text is just excellent!
Your subject is very catchy and allow the reader to demystify the profession of flight attendant, which is a very good thing. Also, the use of modals creates a great structure to your text, it makes it easier to follow and to understand. A conclusion would have ended your text beautifully, but it is still very interesting.
Your text is very clear and concise. You used a simple vocabulary and that way, it is simple to understand for an uninitiated to publicity. The subject is interesting because we can apply some of your tips to our daily life. It would have been a good idea to write smaller paragraphs so the text looks more airy, but it is really just a detail.
Planning a budget or just managing money in general is something really complicated and I think you summarized it pretty well. However, I would have liked the steps to be a little bit more detailed because it is a really interesting topic that everyone should know about. Furthermore, the sentence where you talked about the ledger was a little bit confusing to me when I first read it. Also, when you are planning a budget I thought Excel was used as a ledger (I may be wrong but I do am confused). Anyway, good job on the text it was really interesting.
The use of specific terms give credibility to your recommendations. Even if you use these words, it is still easy to understand the integrality of your steps. The only thing that I find too simple is the last step. I would have personally chosen another step to describe because I found it quite obvious. But, the structure of your text and the presence of many transition words were simply awesome!
I though your text was well-organized due to your subtitles illustrating your steps and your ideas. I liked the visual support, it is clearly showing the danger that War Reporters have to often face. It is easy to understand the main message of your whole text, because your introduction is simple and easy to read. On the other hand, a conclusion would have been necessary to remember the main points of your text. In general, it was an interesting text!
The structure of the whole text is quite impressive. You were able to present a subject difficult to explain and, it was interesting and easy to undertstand due to your perfect introduction. By choosing this subject, it was simple to lose the reader but by creating many paragraphs, you were able to correctly illustrate the steps. Maybe it would have also been clearer if you used titles in your paragraphs to separate the steps. Despite this fact, the whole text was awesome, informative and fun to read!
There are some elements missing in the introduction. A lead before stating your ideas is particularly important. The conclusion is also a bit short. Although, it was an interesting text and you gave great advice to the readers.
You did great job! I appreciated the manner you split your text, it is easier to follow the step of the process this way. However, I would have liked to have more information about the tools such as suggestion of the softwares to use. Overall, your writing was extremely interesting and well divided!
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