B 102 TECHNICAL COMMUNICATION CEGEP DE JONQUIERE
About this class
The Cegep de Jonquiere is situated in northeastern Québec. The college hosts the Media, Arts and Technology program among other Technical and Pre university programs in Engineering and the Sciences.
Students of B 102 Technical Communication aim to acheive a more professional level of language, precise and concise word choice while avoiding the use of false cognates and improving their grammar.
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You did great job! I appreciated the manner you split your text, it is easier to follow the step of the process this way. However, I would have liked to have more information about the tools such as suggestion of the softwares to use. Overall, your writing was extremely interesting and well divided!
Great job! I love how you made it so simple and easy to understand as a student in Multimedia Integration I enjoyed all of it. However, I feel like maybe the step of making the logo and the shape could tell a lot more about the process, but that is my point of view. Overall, I think you did a wonderful job, keep it up.
That is an interesting text! I like how you explain every single part of the making of a website. It is easy to read and there is just enough text to understand. However, I thought more pictures would help everyone to understand more of it. In the end, I love it and it makes want to know more about HTML. Well done !
Your introduction was very captivating and well done. Be careful with your word choice, some words are inappropriate in that context and some sentences don't make sense (In fact, the Asperger's Syndrome is considered as a slow on the development). Great use of transition words, it makes the text easy to read and to follow. You defined certain terms, which was perfect for a non-expert like me. On the other hands there are mistakes in verbs tenses and in spelling. Overall, you did a great job, we can see that this subject is personal and that you are passionate about it; it transmits into your writing which makes it a fun read.
Great introduction, your mapping was well done. The lack of titles makes it less professional looking than it could have looked. It is easy to read and understand because it is simple, you didn't you financial words or terms so it was easy to understand for non-expert like me. Be careful with errors in spelling and grammar. You perfectly followed the outline for your text so it was well done! good job!
This subject is very actual according to all the fake articles we see these days like the Journal de Mourréal. I learned a lot reading this Thank You! A picture could have been nice too.
I find your text very clear to read and to understand. The subtitles are well chosen. The point about familiar words is very interesting but i would have given some examples to help understand.
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Your text is very pertinent and really covers the subject entirely. I am sure that i could be useful for young web entrepreneurs. However, a lighter structure (bullet points or step-by-step) would have made it clearer.
Hello Camille, I really enjoy reading your text. I am not a journalist, but I understand all the different parts that you have described. The only little thought that disappointed me was the fact that your image does not open on my computer. I do not know if this is a problem with my computer, but I suggest you check this out. Thank you for your text.
Zoe, thank you for your text! It's very interesting to think about the technique behind the news broadcasts that we listen every day. I would like to congratulate you for the way that you had organized your text especially for the way you had described each of the terms used. The only tip I would give you is to add additional information about the tv news director of as this is the part I understand less. But your text was really great!
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